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I'm in ... especially love this line:
it was a metaphor for life, all these people doing the same difficult thing at once in their own ways, at their own paces

"... it made her throat swell with kept tears" is the singularly most beautiful order of words I have read in a very, very long time.

And this story... oh, I don't know what to say... this story is so heart-felt and naked. I can see myself mirrored in Vic and my future tunneling as Eleanor. Embarrassingly, to be truthful, I see bits of Eleanor creeping into Vic now, a little more with each passing year.

Thank you so much, ladies, for the encouragement. Coming from both of you, it means so much. :)

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